Hi Nicholas,
Your blogpost uses a variety of examples from the reading, and I can see there are some common topics about them. It would be interesting to read your blog post in a way that brings those examples together, rather than being presented as independent projects. For example, you could use connecting sentences that speak about how the projects are conceptually or materially similar or different. Otherwise, this is a good exercise of looking at different sewing practices in a variety of contexts.
Remember to include an image to your blog post, as well as citations.
Hi Nicholas,
Your blogpost uses a variety of examples from the reading, and I can see there are some common topics about them. It would be interesting to read your blog post in a way that brings those examples together, rather than being presented as independent projects. For example, you could use connecting sentences that speak about how the projects are conceptually or materially similar or different. Otherwise, this is a good exercise of looking at different sewing practices in a variety of contexts.
Remember to include an image to your blog post, as well as citations.